The Magical and Unexpected Adventure (Part 2)

By Tyler Zhou

Chapter 4

A grownup boy, Docky, was shooting into the sky, aiming strangely at a star. He wanted his friend, Gulie, to come.

In the passageway, a girl named Gulie (Docky’s friend) ran through a door, into a room where it was peaceful. 

Yuny found a bottle lying on the ground. It said, “a letter from Asckented”.

“That’s my girlfriend!” Yuny shouted with joy. However, it wasn’t a good thing. There was a dusty rock that had a shark carved on it! 

Gulie fell into a river. It led to a wet door. Someone was knocking on it. Gulie swam to open it, but she didn’t see the paper pinned on the door. If she saw it, she won’t open it. 

KABAM! A gush of water splashed into the room! Gulie was on the surface, which was very bad. 

The water hit the ceiling, and made a crack in it. SPLASH! BOOM! BAM! Fire rushed in, evaporating every hit of water. Luckily, Gulie swam under the water. Or is it luck?

Chapter 5

Sammy and Rocki met a 10-year-old boy, James, and a 18-year-old boy, Reckanst. 

Reckanst alerted, “There’s a waterfall ahead! Swim! Swim!” 

However, it was too late. A girl named Sèvchik swam away too, but she was pulled along by the strong current. The three people helplessly fell suddenly down the waterfall.

“Ouch, ouch,” Sèvchik whispered.

“HOLD YOUR BREATH!!” Rocki alerted. 

SPLASH! Everyone managed to survive the waterfall, but they were going into a low tunnel! They had two choices: drown or climb. They looked at the huge cliffs surrounding them. 

Chapter 6

Jack and Benjamin floated into a storm. Darkness spread the sky like black butter spreading on bread. Towering mountains of waves smashed here and there, blocking Jack and Benjamin’s sight. Crashing and splashing sounds surrounded them. Jack suddenly breathed water, then dropped slowly to the sea floor. He was dead. 

Tom ran and ran, until he found a steep cliff. He looked down. It was 200, 410, 218 kilometres down. Suddenly, Yuny accidentally pushed him down the hole, falling helplessly until he hit the floor (which hurts). Down there was lava, actually. 

John eventually held onto a rope, and swang onto a bar. A huge blast of lava soaked him wet, while he dropped and died.

Yuny went through a door, into another room. Yuny ran and ran and ran until she saw the exit. She forgot that it was a never-ending secret passageway.

A 10-year-old boy named Jècsticn (Jecsticon) fell down onto a string, which led to another string. He popped up from nowhere and down was lava. 

Reckanst was in the middle of swimming when he bumped into Docky, who was still trying to find Gulie. It was 11.35 in the night and they were still finding help. The water got cold until it felt like ice.

Chapter 7

“It isn’t an exit!” Yuny shouted, surprised. She kept on running, until a tall man called Bungust appeared in front of Yuny’s enemy, Yustick. 

“Take ’em,” Bungust demanded in a low voice.

“So?!” Yuny said, while turning back and running. 

Yustick was a girl. Yuny didn’t like girls who had boy names.

Sammy replied, “Climb.” 

Rocky and Sèvchik lost grip, then fell under the low tunnel! Fortunately, it was a very short tunnel. The river seemed like it was never-ending. 

Just then, they turned North, followed by a steep ramp. 

“Climb!” Rocky thought.

He climbed it, but she fell onto a siren! WEE WOO WEE WOO WEE WOO WEE WOO … Rocky had to run. He saw a weird sentence carved on the ceiling. It said:

The Magical and Unexpected Adventure was written by Tyler in Term 1 of Creative Writing Workshops for Kids. To join us next term online, click here!